Entry Blog #3: The Feeling Of Freshness
When I open the bag, the packing makes a loud crunching sound that is like music to my ears. It also feels hard and dry to the touch and looks completely white, like a piece of chalk. The act of chewing it gives me the impression that my mouth and teeth are being cleaned, in addition to the taste's sweet, lasting, and chilly sensations. When I put it in my mouth, it gives me a cooling sensation that makes my mouth feel clean. It reminds me of the chilly surge of wind that rushed into the house on Christmas morning, sending shivers through the body.
Hi Deasia. I loved your description of how the mint reminded you of a cold Christmas morning. It makes me want to grab a mint right now. I also liked what said about the mint giving you a cool, sweet feeling.
ReplyDeleteHi Deasia, I like your agreeance with the mint and winter. It is a popular feeling amongst most people. This makes it easier for your audience to get closer to you and feel more comfortable.
ReplyDeleteHey Deasia, i like that you put whenever you opened the treat it made a loud crunch. mint packaging for sure makes a lot of noise when opening it. i also liked that you put that it reminded you of Christmas, i love Christmas and how cold it gets similar to a mint.
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